Critique Pages

Today was the final critique for the Homes for Cyborgs studio, for which we were asked to produce 3 A3 posters presenting our cyborg and home design. I ran out of time to finish the home to the standard I wanted, but am pleased I continued to improve the design and didn't settle with something I wasn't happy with.

 

Issues to address:

•  flat slab for floor - a continuation of the walls would effectively create an entirely organic shape
• hexagon mesh applied to front of hub
• create more orthographic renderings, display as wireframe
• show cyborgs inhabiting home
• create ruined landscape as setting for home
• render image of the tunnels without the hub
• depict initial cyborg morphing into home
• show cyborg bringing back rubble
• reassess the scale of the home then make it apparent